Pitch and First Draft Sample

My focus for the feature article is the educational opportunities and support services available to pregnant teens and young parents in the Geelong region.

Our local area has some ground breaking programs of educational reform, which ensure that beginning a family young does not need to mark the end to formal learning.

For someone under 19 years of age who has the huge responsibility of raising a child, the traditional school system may not feel relevant.

Add sleepless nights, nappy changing, health concerns, the potential of post natal depression, breast feeding challenges, sense of isolation and constantly learning on the job… a teen parent has very little in common with their peers. Disconnections from the authoritative school structure and from their past social network is understandable.

My feature will illustrate that schooling is more complex with a family, but not impossible. Finishing school can be done with the right support, an open mind, a bit of flexibility and a determined  attitude. Most importantly, it requires knowing how to access help.

Education truly is the key to having freedom. It enables the ability to make choices for a more financially secure future, for the student and for their children.

To prepare for the writing of my of feature, I have conducted extensive online research. I continue to examine the local, statewide, Australian and international approaches to education and the ways that teen pregnancy impacts future individual’s expectations. I have looked into a range of statistical data to gain numerical understandings of the effects that teen pregnancy has upon individuals and on society.  I observed a range of opinions shown within previously published pieces relating to the subject, in order to gather community view points, observe existing alternative educational structures supporting pregnant teens and methods by which young parents reject societal stereotypes.

I aim to investigate how individuals cope with and work beyond prejudice.

After researching the support mechanisms provided by local agencies, I explored how the assistance available to  young families is discovered and accepted.  I made contact with many of the regional organisations and have conducted a series of face to face interviews. I wanted to hear what stakeholders on the front line experienced and how they felt about the delivery of their programs.

I met with several local representatives involved in providing education, maternal assistance and child health care along with professionals in other support services. I was curious to see what they felt was missing in education provision, who they most needed to reach, what successes they can boast of and what lessons there are for the future.

After my research and interviews, I am fully equipped to write a well informed piece to highlight the challenges, accomplishments, opinions and ambitions surrounding my central themes. I have a wide range of views and attitudes to reflect and report from.

My research techniques, involved primary and secondary sources, taking of photographs, developing the images into a slideshow, investigating the individuals who have great input, setting up interviews, recording audio files of the interviews, learning how and then editing  audio files, discovering how to and developing a youtube presence, exploring how blog formats operate and generating this blog, researching with RSS feeds, connecting with online communities, attaching feeds and hyperlinks to the blog, putting part of one of my interviews onto this blog and developing a map of my story.

My aim is to write a feature article which provides personal profiles, suggestions for way to access pregnancy and educational assistance, challenge existing stereotypes, outlines the benefits of continuing education for young parents and make historical comparisons between experiences today and that of young pregnant women’s past treatment by society.

I have developed a rough draft, embedded with hyperinks which illustrates the tone, research usage, angle and substance of my feature. The following paragraphs are possibly the start of my feature…


I was at secondary school as Midnight Oil, Culture Club and INXS ruled the top 40 charts. Back then, like in ever other era, occasionally a student became pregnant. The coping strategy for this life event was hiding in an oversized uniform until the bump could no longer be disguised. Upon discovery, the girl had one simple choice; to drop out of school and fade into oblivion. The remaining students usually then labelled her a ‘tart’, gossiped about her lack of future prospects and claimed she got what she deserved for not keeping her legs crossed. The teaching staff, relieved to be rid of their problem student, would hold a moral high-ground, rarely mentioning the student again. The rare use of her name would only have been while on their highly respectable, religious soap boxes, to issue other potential sluts with a cautionary tale. Apparently, those who lived puritanically righteous lives had the world at their feet. Meanwhile the girl had to hope for the support of her family, or potentially the father of her unborn child before she could later access a single parent’s pension.

By the end of the freeloving hippie revolution, as Australian soldiers were conscripted into the Vietnam war and at the time the contraceptive pill first became available, quite different approach to the issue of teen pregnancy. According to government figures, Seven thousand, eight hundred and twenty adoptions took place in Australia.

To Be Continued…

Once my feature story has been completed, I aim to have it published in magazines, in newspapers and online in targeted forums. My feature could easily be voiced as a radio story, or could appear in multimedia platforms, using visual, audio, graphic design and the written word, combined.  While the story has been written to showcase the local approach to the issues, it could be easily reformatted to have a wider appeal for a broader regional, interstate or international readership. The issues are not specific to our region, so the piece would have value and interest globally.

My target publication market is where ever there is an interest in community issues, families, pregnancy, education, health, emotional well being, parenthood, teen issues, childhood, local resourcing, alternative learning strategies and publications which strengthen communities.

Examples of specific publications I could send my story to would include obvious ones such as the Geelong Advertiser, Geelong and Surf Coast News, the Geelong and Surf Coast Independents and Geelong’s Baby and Child Magazine. I would be more ambitious and may submit to larger and interstate newspapers which have education and health supplements such as; The Australian NewspaperThe Canberra TimesSydney Morning HeraldNorthern Territory NewsBrisbane Courier MailThe Adelaide AdvertiserThe Hobart MercuryThe Melbourne Age or The West Australian. I am also interested in pursuing publications which have family and/or educational focus. These would include; The Conversation (Online), Curriculum Leadership (electronic teaching journal), Education Today (magazine), Educations Services Australia (Ministerial and business online educational publication), Practical Parenting (Magazine), Nurture Parenting (Magazine and online formats), Child Magazines (produced for each capital city), Happy Child (Magazine), Parenting Ideas (magazine), Australian Family (Online and magazine formats), Family Circle (Magazine), Australian Family (Magazine), Australian Woman’s Weekly (Magazine), Baby & Child (Magazine) or Parenting Ideas (Magazine).

There are also numerous websites and overseas publications that would be suitable to market my story to.


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